♻️ Refinement (writing) ♻️

Benefits➕:
📖 Make your long-form writing more clear and coherent ;
📝 Learn to better structure your paragraphs ;
⚡️ Get your point across faster with more organized writing .

❗️ Heads-up: To make most of this game, play with a timer. That is, right after having read the initial text, start a timer for 40 secs: 10 secs for replacing, combining, and moving tasks. 10 secs for the bonus round.

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❗️INSTRUCTIONS: Read the selection and start answering questions.

📄 However, an early start deprives students of the required eight to nine hours of sleep and also demands they function optimally when they are least able to do so. Start School Later is leading the movement to push back high school starting before 8 a.m. It will prevent schools from starting before 8 a.m. They are backed by sleep scientists who argue that an early start interferes with adolescents' circadian rhythms. Sleep research shows that beginning at puberty, adolescents gradually shift to falling asleep later. 📃

🔁 REPLACE THE SENTENCE:

📄 However, an early start deprives students of the required eight to nine hours of sleep and also demands they function optimally when they are least able to do so. Start School Later is leading the movement to push back high school starting before 8 a.m. 🔁 They are backed by sleep scientists who argue that an early start interferes with adolescents' circadian rhythms. Sleep research shows that beginning at puberty, adolescents gradually shift to falling asleep later. 📃

1️⃣ The claim that early start is interfering with adolescents circadian rhythms is backed by sleep scientists who have argued it ;
2️⃣ It is backed by sleep scientists who argue that an early start interferes with adolescents' circadian rhythms .

↔️ COMBINE THE SENTENCES:

📄 However, an early start deprives students of the required eight to nine hours of sleep and also demands they function optimally when they are least able to do so. Start School Later is leading the movement to push back high school start times. ↔️ It will prevent schools from starting before 8 a.m. It is backed by sleep scientists who argue that an early start interferes with adolescents. Sleep research shows that beginning at puberty, adolescents gradually shift to falling asleep later. 📃

1️⃣ There is a movement for starting school later that is being led by Start School Later and prevented schools starting before 8 a.m. ;
2️⃣ Start School Later is leading the movement to push back high school start times and prevent schools from starting before 8 a.m. .

↩️ MOVE THE SENTENCE:

📄 ↩️ However, an early start deprives students of the required eight to nine hours of sleep and also demands they function optimally when they are least able to do so. Start School Later is leading the movement to push back high school starting before 8 a.m. It will prevent schools from starting before 8 a.m. 🅰️ They are backed by sleep scientists who argue that an early start interferes with adolescents' circadian rhythms. Sleep research shows that beginning at puberty, adolescents gradually shift to falling asleep later. 🅱️ 📃

1️⃣ Location A ;
2️⃣ Location B .

‼️ So, if you replaced the sentence, combined the sentences, and moved the sentence correctly, your text should be refined like this:

📄 ✅ Start School Later is leading the movement to push back high school start times and prevent schools from starting before 8 a.m. ✅ It is backed by sleep scientists who argue that an early start interferes with adolescents' circadian rhythms. Sleep research shows that beginning at puberty, adolescents gradually shift to falling asleep later. ✅ However, an early start deprives students of the required eight to nine hours of sleep and also demands they function optimally when they are least able to do so. 📃

ℹ️ 'Refined' implies that your text is free of redundancies, grammatically correct, and is logical, which allows a reader to read effortlessly.

🔤 Spelling (writing) 🔤

Benefits➕:
📄✔️ Eliminate spelling errors in your writing ;
☑️ Learn to catch errors that spell-check overlooks ;
📝 Write more efficiently and confidently .

❗️ INSTRUCTIONS: Finish all three rounds choosing the selection that correctly completes the word above.

📍ROUNDS:

♨️ Double or single letter?
♨️ Flip-flop
♨️ Add a letter or OK?

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