♻️ Refinement (writing) ♻️

Benefits➕:
📖 Make your long-form writing more clear and coherent ;
📝 Learn to better structure your paragraphs ;
⚡️ Get your point across faster with more organized writing .

❗️ Heads-up: To make most of this game, play with a timer. That is, right after having read the initial text, start a timer for 40 secs: 10 secs for replacing, combining, and moving tasks. 10 secs for the bonus round.

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❗️INSTRUCTIONS: Read the selection and start answering questions.

📄 Anyone who has ever received a blood transfusion owes a debt of gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew. He was the inventor of the blood bank. In 1940 he completed a PhD with a thesis titled Banked Blood, which outlined his process for separating and storing blood plasma. At the start of World War II, Drew recruited 100,000 blood donors and became the head of the blood bank program of the American Red Cross. After graduating, Drew spent time developing a method for storing blood. 📃

🔁 REPLACE THE SENTENCE:

📄 Anyone who has ever received a blood transfusion owes a debt of gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew. He was the inventor of the blood bank. In 1940 he completed a PhD with a thesis titled Banked Blood, which outlined his process for separating and storing blood plasma. 🔁 At the start of World War II, Drew recruited 100,000 blood donors and became the head of the blood bank program of the American Red Cross. After graduating, Drew spent time developing a method for storing blood. 📃

1️⃣ KEEP AS IS ;
2️⃣ At the start of World War II, Drew became the head of the blood bank program and he also recruited 100,000 blood donors .

↔️ COMBINE THE SENTENCES:

📄 Anyone who has ever received a blood transfusion owes a debt of gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew. ↔️ He was the inventor of the blood bank. In 1940 he completed a PhD with a thesis titled Banked Blood, which outlined his process for separating and storing blood plasma. At the start of World War II, Drew recruited 100,000 blood donors and became the head of the blood bank program of the American Red Cross. After graduating, Drew spent time developing a method for storing blood. 📃

1️⃣ Anyone who receives a blood transfusion owed gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew, the inventor of the blood bank ;
2️⃣ Anyone who has ever received a blood transfusion owes a debt of gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew, the inventor of the blood bank .

↩️ MOVE THE SENTENCE:

📄 🅰️ Anyone who has ever received a blood transfusion owes a debt of gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew. He was the inventor of the blood bank. 🅱️ In 1940 he completed a PhD with a thesis titled Banked Blood, which outlined his process for separating and storing blood plasma. At the start of World War II, Drew recruited 100,000 blood donors and became the head of the blood bank program of the American Red Cross. ↩️ After graduating, Drew spent time developing a method for storing blood. 📃

1️⃣ Location A ;
2️⃣ Location B .

‼️ So, if you replaced the sentence, combined the sentences, and moved the sentence correctly, your text should be refined like this:

📄 ✅ Anyone who has ever received a blood transfusion owes a debt of gratitude to Dr. Charles Drew, the inventor of the blood bank. ✅ After graduating, Drew spent time developing a method for storing blood. In 1940 he completed a PhD with a thesis titled Banked Blood, which outlined his process for separating and storing blood plasma. ✅ At the start of World War II, Drew recruited 100,000 blood donors and became the head of the blood bank program of the American Red Cross. 📃

ℹ️ 'Refined' implies that your text is clear, free of redundancies, and is logical, which allows a reader to read effortlessly.

🔤 Spelling (writing) 🔤

Benefits➕:
📄✔️ Eliminate spelling errors in your writing ;
☑️ Learn to catch errors that spell-check overlooks ;
📝 Write more efficiently and confidently .

❗️ INSTRUCTIONS: Finish all three rounds choosing the selection that correctly completes the word above.

📍ROUNDS:

♨️ Endings
♨️ Add a letter or OK?
♨️ Plurals

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