In 1999 Bertrand Piccard and Brian Jones completed a 20โญ๏ธday journey to become the first pilots to travel nonstop around the world in a hot air balloon.
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During World War I, it took just twoโญ๏ธdays for a letter from Britain to reach the front in France.
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โป๏ธ Refinement (writing) โป๏ธ
Benefitsโ:
๐ Make your long-form writing more clear and coherent ;
๐ Learn to better structure your paragraphs ;
โก๏ธ Get your point across faster with more organized writing .
โ๏ธ Heads-up: To make most of this game, play with a timer. That is, right after having read the initial text, start a timer for 40 secs: 10 secs for replacing, combining, and moving tasks. 10 secs for the bonus round.
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Benefitsโ:
๐ Make your long-form writing more clear and coherent ;
๐ Learn to better structure your paragraphs ;
โก๏ธ Get your point across faster with more organized writing .
โ๏ธ Heads-up: To make most of this game, play with a timer. That is, right after having read the initial text, start a timer for 40 secs: 10 secs for replacing, combining, and moving tasks. 10 secs for the bonus round.
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_______must join โคต๏ธ
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โ๏ธINSTRUCTIONS: Read the selection and start answering questions.
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. The first undersea cable were set up in 1850 between England and France. The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. The first undersea cable were set up in 1850 between England and France. The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐
๐ REPLACE THE SENTENCE:
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. ๐ The first undersea cable were set up in 1850 between England and France. The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐
1๏ธโฃ The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France ;
2๏ธโฃ Between England and France in 1850 the first cable had been set up .
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. ๐ The first undersea cable were set up in 1850 between England and France. The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐
1๏ธโฃ The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France ;
2๏ธโฃ Between England and France in 1850 the first cable had been set up .
โ๏ธ COMBINE THE SENTENCES:
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France. The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. โ๏ธ They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐
1๏ธโฃ Fiber optic cables were first used in the 1980s and now transmit data undersea ;
2๏ธโฃ Cables made from fiber optic were first used in the 1980s, and today transmit undersea data .
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France. The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. โ๏ธ They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐
1๏ธโฃ Fiber optic cables were first used in the 1980s and now transmit data undersea ;
2๏ธโฃ Cables made from fiber optic were first used in the 1980s, and today transmit undersea data .
โฉ๏ธ MOVE THE SENTENCE:
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France. โฉ๏ธ The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. ๐ ฐ๏ธ Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐ ฑ๏ธ ๐
1๏ธโฃ Location A ;
2๏ธโฃ Location B .
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France. โฉ๏ธ The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. ๐ ฐ๏ธ Fiber optic cables came into use in the 1980s. They now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. ๐ ฑ๏ธ ๐
1๏ธโฃ Location A ;
2๏ธโฃ Location B .
๐ BONUS ROUND:
โ The aim of this paragraph is to...
โ The aim of this paragraph is to...
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1๏ธโฃ ...advocate for more undersea cables ;
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2๏ธโฃ ...provide a technical explanation of undersea cables ;
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3๏ธโฃ ...give a concise overview of undersea cables .
โผ๏ธ So, if you replaced the sentence, combined the sentences, and moved the sentence correctly, your text should be refined like this:
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. โ The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. โ Fiber optic cables were first used in the 1980s and now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. โ The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. ๐
โน๏ธ 'Refined' implies that your text is free of redundancies, grammatically correct, and is logical, which allows a reader to read effortlessly.
๐ Undersea cables were first used to transmit telegraph signals. โ The first undersea cable was set up in 1850 between England and France. The first transatlantic telephone cable was completed in 1956. โ Fiber optic cables were first used in the 1980s and now transmit data undersea. Today undersea cables transmit 99% of all international data. โ The only continent not yet linked with undersea fiber optics is Antarctica because of the extremely cold water temperature and ice movement. ๐
โน๏ธ 'Refined' implies that your text is free of redundancies, grammatically correct, and is logical, which allows a reader to read effortlessly.
๐ค Spelling (writing) ๐ค
Benefitsโ:
๐โ๏ธ Eliminate spelling errors in your writing ;
โ๏ธ Learn to catch errors that spell-check overlooks ;
๐ Write more efficiently and confidently .
โ๏ธ INSTRUCTIONS: Finish all three rounds choosing the selection that correctly completes the word above.
๐ROUNDS:
โจ๏ธ Vowel choice
โจ๏ธ Add a letter or OK?
โจ๏ธ Double or single letter?
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โฐโโโโฐโ๏ธ๐๐โฑโโโโฏ
Benefitsโ:
๐โ๏ธ Eliminate spelling errors in your writing ;
โ๏ธ Learn to catch errors that spell-check overlooks ;
๐ Write more efficiently and confidently .
โ๏ธ INSTRUCTIONS: Finish all three rounds choosing the selection that correctly completes the word above.
๐ROUNDS:
โจ๏ธ Vowel choice
โจ๏ธ Add a letter or OK?
โจ๏ธ Double or single letter?
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_______must join โคต๏ธ
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๐ROUND 2๏ธโฃ. Add a letter or OK? ๐
tru_ly
tru_ly
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ฐ๏ธ: e ;
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ฑ๏ธ: no change .
๐ LAST ROUND. Double or single letter? ๐
cin_amon
cin_amon
Anonymous Quiz
79%
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ฐ๏ธ: n ;
21%
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ฑ๏ธ: no change .